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The nice Teacher

As soon as Happy-faced Mr Brown jogged into class seven, the familiar room immediately appeared to turn happy. He was thin with an pleasant stare rather like an happy butterfly. Settle down children, ‘ smiled the new teacher I am not used to being in this class.’ 

sky ship adventure

Over the past two weeks it was freezing, icicles dangling from the skyship mountains ,snow toped they were almost about to land.

Goblins scavenging in a broken down ship hoping to find gold and treasure .

” A whole horde of them what will we do” worried Bob.

“We have bows with flaming arrows ” exclaimed the captain .

They began shooting the goblins tried to fight back but small puny pebbles didn’t do much they hardly even hit the ship. With all the goblins gone they could finally land.

After landing they began to set up camp Bob looked around the area the goblins were searching for treasure. He found a message from the 2nd captain it read .

“I have been taken by the king goblin in the cave on top of the great mountain .

Bob went to tell the others they said we will have to wait because the ship overheated .

Later that night the camp was set up and a fire was started Bob felt a shiver down his spine he felt like something was there , could it be more goblins

Breakdown

Adam (aged 21) arrived at lake at the end of the coast; it has been a cold, fascinating journey. As he looked out of his car window, Adam saw three things: a black fog flowing over the cold sea; the waves crashing ferociously against the stone-age rocks and icy rain whipping across the hillside battering all the buildings. Where would he start looking for the missing boy?  He started to turn back on his car and…his car broke down. He got out and started to run faster than a lion going in for his prey.

clauses

He went outside, Tom waited, until the snow fell on him. The phone rang so he got back up after that he grabbed his suitcase and answered it and listened. He opened the door and then went in the flat and crossed the room.

Since there was a bad smell, I bought a gas mask.

Whenever I heard an odd sound, I wore a shirt.

As it was a strange request, I played music very loudly.

clauses and phrases

Bob ran down the road.
He fell over.

Bob had just fell over because he was running down the road.

 

The thunder roared.
The hobbits hid.

The thunder roared so the hobbits hid.

 

Bilbo slept in a cave.
The goblins attacked.

Bilbo slept in a cave, so the goblins attacked.

 

The cart came to a wheezing halt.
Gandalf strode into the hobbit hole.

The cart came to a wheezing halt, so Gandalf strode into the rabbit hole.

 

Jim was interested in the idea.
He rang his friend.

Jim was interested in the idea, so he rang his friend.

 

Owls are nocturnal.
This means they are active at night.

They have excellent eyesight.

Owls sleep in the day and are nocturnal so there active at night and they have great eyesight.

 

shall be shocked …

You shall be shocked…

 

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We must give you:

  • a slip in case of allergies.
  • a menu for the breakfast the next day and you can have it in your bed.
  • another slip for when we start the day of, and the time we end.

We can also give you a servant so then he can give you things that you don’t want to go and get but you will have to pay for that. You don’t need to get one its just if you’re interested. They cost £250 for a week to use. You have fans for the summer, and we have a campfire for winter you just pick the weather that YOU would like to come at.

Things you can do:

You can go swimming for as long as you want but it must be before we shut it down its also on the slip. You can have any breakfast, dinner and tea that you want because we have it all. For breakfast we have English breakfast or pancakes and if you want some cereal. You can also get anything you want because it will be on the table in the kitchen, but you will have to pay, but its not that expensive.

 

 

Mr Hardy

As soon as dim-face Mr Hardy strode into the class seven, the familiar room quickly appeared to turn depressing. He was thin with an unpleasant stare rather than like an angry snake. “Settle down children”. Shouted the new teacher, “I hate being used for disobey.

giraffe

Dust coverd, the sky high giraffe chomps.

Its eyes twiching from flys itching.

Large chopers breaking down palm leaves.

Speedy feet runing through the desert.

The lions roar heard in the distance.

The giraffe stomach growling

giraffe searches for delicious food.