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You are a shining star glooming in the dark sky. You are as yellow as the blazing sun shining into my eyes
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I like the shining star part and maybe something other than yellow.
The farting fish is funny and good.
It is a good poem.
This a funny poem
Can you tell the author why you think it is a funny poem?
Lovely vocabulary the glooming vocabulary is the best I have heard