Long brownish hair like spaghetti,
A smile like the sun,
Brown eyes like milk chocolate,
Red and yellow tie,
Robe dark as night,
You will always notice her in the Gryffindor common room ,
A Felix Felicis potion made by her ,
Freckles like sprinkles on a magic cupcake.
Inspired by: JK.ROWLING and EMMA WATSON
BY: Mila Tomev
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Your poem is really good. I can see you like Harry Potter.
Maybe you can add a bit more next time.
How about doing some more description.
1. Wow i love this especially the line long brownish hair like spaghetti its a very good way to describe a girls hair!
2. Maybe you could describe her tie?
3. How about you describe some more characters because you are really good.