Autumn and Winter
Autumn
I can see orange and red leaves.
I can hear birds.
I can touch trees.
I can taste cold breath.
I can smell wetness
Winter
I can see snow
I can hear crunchy snow
I can touch snow
Autumn
I can see orange and red leaves.
I can hear birds.
I can touch trees.
I can taste cold breath.
I can smell wetness
Winter
I can see snow
I can hear crunchy snow
I can touch snow
I love your discription of Autumn, it is really accurate.
Can you think of anything else in winter apart from snow.
Try using different openers to I can.
I loved the theme of this poem especially winter but an improvement for Mr/Mrs anonymous is you should of included a bit more for winter it’sa great poem anyway 🙂