The autumn haiku
Crispy leafs falling.
The blossoms tangled.
Bonfires banging loudly.
The marshmellows melting.
Rain shattering everywhere.
Bunnies sleeping softly.
The fireplace burning.
The wind blowing
children playing outside.
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Nice Haiku! Where are the bunnies sleeping? Why are the marshmallows melting? Also,I love the way you wrote the bunnies sleep!
This is a great piece of work well done . Great punctuation very well done . Well done on keeping 5 7 5.
This is a very good poem but just remember to put your comers after.
Instead of full stops make them commas.
I like the fact that you tried to stick to the 5,7,5 rule.
What place are the children playing in?
Maybe be more specific e.g the auburn leaves.