The Haunted Story by Gustas
On a freezing, soggy day, there was an empty old house. Inside the creaky house were antique clocks. There was thunder as loud as massive drums banging. Alex felt tingles like the bugs of spirits crawling up on his skin.
On a freezing, soggy day, there was an empty old house. Inside the creaky house were antique clocks. There was thunder as loud as massive drums banging. Alex felt tingles like the bugs of spirits crawling up on his skin.
I like the way you described the house, so I guess it is a haunted house.
I think that you can improve and describe about the clocks a bit more.