The haunted house by Karan
Dave slowly entered the haunted house. He went inside and he saw a table. It was an ordinary wooden table. But to his surprise, the table started to talk to him! Dave was shocked, like a mum who realises she forgot to pick up her children from school. Then he tried to carry on walking, but in the corner of his eye he saw somebody. He froze, he knew by the curve of the tail it was the devil!
Very good just add a bit more adjectives
Great Karan love those adjectives.
Maybe just add some alliteration.