The Horror
Bog Zog slowly crept across the sticky swamp. Frightened he got a pot. He started to make a potion. A puff of rich blue smoke swirled out.All of a sudden,the rich blue smoke started to make a trail. So Bog Zog decided to follow it. It led him to a basement. Suddenly, he heard squeals and yells. He got out his baseball bat and slowly went for the door. As he opened it a creak sound came out. What he saw shook him to his core.
I love your post especially when the blue smoke came out and when he gets terrified in the end.Is bogzog an alien?I think yours is perfect.