Zoe was walking into Raven’s  stable and saw Raven running away she was confused,scared, worried. (Weather) It was sort of hot and then all of a sudden it started rain but not heavy only like a shower . Oh no Zoe thought Raven didn’t like the rain . (setting) She started shouting “Raven”!  Scared ,confused, baffled. Then he came over.They walked across the muddy wet fields , about an hour later they finally arrived .