Snow is falling all around us
Christmas is coming Christmas is fun.
Putting lights around the christmas tree.
Leaves drop down loudly.
Spooky banners on the fun.
Halloween is fun
The sun in my window.
Ice lollies are melting all around.
The sun is out.
Buds on the trees.
Dandy lions blossoms on the trees.
Ester eggs around.
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1) I liked the repetition when you said Christmas is fun then you said Halloween is fun.
2) Do you prefer Halloween or Christmas?
3)Next time, maybe split the lines into two lines otherwise it’s a bit of a mouthful to say.