The crystal like snow glistened in the sun, making it look like sharp crystals below your feet.
A man walked on the snow to this old broken abandoned house.
He walked quietly and slow.
His feet was cold and flat,
his hair was thin and short,
As he was walking to the old house a crow landed on his shoulder .
The crow was his only friend
When they went in the house there were broken glass on the ground, the wooden table knocked over
As the full moon was out the went man went away and was never to been seen.
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I enjoyed the poem it was interesting, but I would add some short sentences and adverbial
Really good adjectives very powerful I like the crystal like snow you also set the seen really well.
Well done I really liked the powerful adjectives I love the simile like crystal snow astounding
Really good piece and outstanding punctuation. Welldone!
I enjoyed reading this but I noticed that the beginning was the same as St Laurence’s poem try to use your own ideas next time.