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Emily and the stalker

Emily and the stalker

Emily lived in the orphanage. Her parents past away when she was five. She only had her brother now. She was all alone. Later that night, everyone was asleep except for Emily. She creeped out of her room and crept out in the silent night. She was escaping. Tiptoeing through the village time was hurrying along. Dawn came and Emily had to hide . Suddenly, she sprinted as fast as a lightning bolt hitting the ground. Emily climbed up a tree and hid into the leaves. Someone was following her…💨💨⚡⚡⚡🌧🌧🌧🌧🌧

5 Responses to “Emily and the stalker”

  1. Eva-Antony School October 22, 2020 at 10:22 am

    wow i loved this great descrition!

  2. 1.Wow i loved how you said her age when her parents died! It had a lot of suspense!
    2.Where is her brother?
    3. Maybe you could add an exlamation mark somewhere.

  3. 1) Love the short sentences.
    2) How did you come up with these AMAZINGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG ideas?
    3) Could you describe the village?

  4. Nicely done

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