Emily and the stalker
Emily and the stalker
Emily lived in the orphanage. Her parents past away when she was five. She only had her brother now. She was all alone. Later that night, everyone was asleep except for Emily. She creeped out of her room and crept out in the silent night. She was escaping. Tiptoeing through the village time was hurrying along. Dawn came and Emily had to hide . Suddenly, she sprinted as fast as a lightning bolt hitting the ground. Emily climbed up a tree and hid into the leaves. Someone was following her…💨💨⚡⚡⚡🌧🌧🌧🌧🌧
wow i loved this great descrition!
Make sure you read your comments back and ensure they have capital letters.
1.Wow i loved how you said her age when her parents died! It had a lot of suspense!
2.Where is her brother?
3. Maybe you could add an exlamation mark somewhere.
1) Love the short sentences.
2) How did you come up with these AMAZINGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG ideas?
3) Could you describe the village?
Nicely done