Snow
Snow fell across Birmingham,as the emagented polar bear was charging at Zackas he was standing like a statew .He started to sprint away from the emagented polar bear.
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Really love your writing I really want to hear more from you great job.
1.Hello I like your use of the word emagented it fits perfect with your work.
2.What made you think of this idea?
3. Could you instead say as the emagented polar bear charged at him Zackas stood as still as a statue?
Hey pippi
1. I Like the choice of words you used
2. What made you think of snow
3. you can improve on maybe check your spelling and also keep on going good job!