Terrifying costumes on Halloween
When i look out on Halloween night i look in horror.All I see is terrifying costumes.First one i see is a boy in a frightening costume pumpkin. I see not 1 not 2 but I see more than 10 dressed men and women in witch’s I start to freak out but I remember what I get I get sweets.But whats that I see its a granny wearing a Halloween costume. That’s by far the creepiest thing iv ever seen.This was the day i called TERRIBLE TUESDAY!
Hello, Connie. I liked your writing, very nice!
I liked the sentence: When I look out on Halloween night, all I see is horror.
Check for capitals;’ I’ is a capital! And ‘I’ve’ has a capital, an apostrophe, and an e on the end.
I enjoyed your writing today Connie, I also like how you based it on Halloween!
Keep posting,
From Maggie SWW
Hi Connie I like how you have made it about Halloween. Don’t you think you could use capital i ? Next time, can you wright the number in words not in digits. Olivia SWW
Hi connie, I love your writing really good how did you feel when you saw all of them? where were you in that story.e.g. outside? loved your writing keep on posting and work hard.
from Freya
Hi Connie I loved your work it what’s the most terrifying costume you’ve seen on Halloween?
I would consider using more punctuation to distinguish between each sentence.
Great work.
Keep it up.
Ryan