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5 Responses to “The animal”

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    Isabella October 22, 2020 at 10:21 am

    this is really good well done…

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    Freya October 22, 2020 at 10:22 am

    1.good work
    2.what made you think of this idea
    3.you could improve on your speech remember your speech marks

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    jake November 1, 2020 at 6:13 pm

    1.hey Nice piece of work.
    2. Include some speech marks to improve.
    3.what gave you inspiration to write this?

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    Seth November 4, 2020 at 10:22 am

    Good work. From Seth SWW.

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    Cameron SWW November 4, 2020 at 10:35 am

    A very interesting piece of work, but i think you could improve your speech marks.

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