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The anonymous!

Ava was was bored so she decided to clean up her room. To her surprise, when she was cleaning, she found an anonymous mask in her room. Tomorrow was Halloween so she decided to wear the mask when she went trick or treating. When she went trick or treating,there was a mysterious shadow following her. But this shadow was not her’s. She was terrified for her life, so she ran to her friends and told them what she saw. But her friends didn’t believe her. So she ran home and she told her parents but still her parents did not believe her. So she ran to her grandparents house and she told them, and finally someone believed her so she stayed at her grandparent’s house for the night.

3 Responses to “The anonymous!”

  1. Charlie and sonny DPS November 12, 2020 at 10:20 am

    i love the way you write and it is very descriptive and mysterious.

  2. I really like the way you have described the mask and shadow
    How long did it take you to write it
    Add more detail to the mask.

  3. I really like the way you have introduced the mask.
    Where about in the room did the mask come from?
    I think you should add more detail to the running ‘She ran for her life past the local Tescos and her other friend Amelie’s house straight to her parent’s house! ‘

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