Leaves drop down slowly,
As I walk up to a house
sweets are everywhere
snow layers on the ground,
decorations cover the tree
snow mans all around town
Easter eggs are here
the sun is shining on me
flowers blooming now
Ice cream all around
people around the pool now
put your sun cream on.
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1) There are lots of good adjectives
2) Do you have a character?
3) Remember full stops.
1.The haiku was really interesting, my favourite parts were at the start of the paragraphs. 2.Why are people around the pool not inside the pool? 3.Next time try to leave a line when you start a paragraph.
Wow I love this so much. You have lots of good description
thank you! for the motavating comment
Wow wow wow this is amazing love the description
Wow amazing love how you added adjectives to describe the noun .
Thank you for an amazing comment.