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The Storm By Liam N and Morgan

A light flickered as the storm grew. Bethany opened the front door with fury in her eyes. To her surprise, her neighbour had stolen her prized ring. “ASHLEY. IM GOING TO…” Bethany looked up into the sky. There was a deadly storm heading straight for Bethany’s house. Unsteadily with a lot of effort, she shovelled herself into her home.

One Response to “The Storm By Liam N and Morgan”

  1. 1. I love you story especially the direct speech.

    2.Could you introduce Ashley a bit more?

    3. Maybe you could describe the sky as dark ,storming sky?

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