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Wanted

Paul stared at the tree house messily. Waiting for the time of all of hollies friends to come out. He wanted to trick his sister and all of her cute little friends.” I’ll wait behind this bush” he thought. He also wanted to make them jump with fear.

 

 

One Response to “Wanted”

  1. Good descriptive work you have really described the way he wants to scare his sisters friends.
    Next step:You could add more.
    All together well done!

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