Winter by Aarav TJS
Flowers decaded,
Christmas trees all over town,
Snow falls gracefully.
Snowmen being built,
Icicles drop like arrows,
Fires being burnt.
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Hi Aarav!
I like how you put fires being burnt.
Could you put another small sentence other wise brilliant.
Hi Aarav, you’ve done a great job!
1. I love the second paragraph an especially the sentence “Icicles drop like arrows.”
2.Do you like doing pieces of writing like this?
3. Where you do your commas remember that you don’t need a capital letter after.