Emma opened the door ‘Creek’ it went she wondered if the door had ever been oiled but that didn’t matter now this house was a maze and it was haunted. Sounds were echoing off the cracked walls Emma figured out it was from the bathroom she entered of course she didn’t believe in ghosts. “Ahhh!” Screamed a voice. Darkness.
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This poem is really good because it leaves you on a cliff hanger.
I love the onomatopoeia in the first sentence. It really wants me to read more!
I agree Beth
Nice poem Zara just describe the voice .
I like your poem Zara. Can you try and describe what sort of sounds Emma heard, also it is good because as Emily said it leaves u on a cliff hanger.