The Mysterious Ghost by Hamza
Jamie’s mouth dropped in awe, the ghostly figure returned. But why? There was nothing but silence in the dark alleyway, all the ghost was doing was staring at Jamie with his beady eyes. Shivering with fear, Jamie walked closer to the deathly man. Clenching his fists hold in his fear, a chill ran up his spine and a stroke of fear hit him like a punch. He remembered the last encounter with this ghost. He was all alone in his house, his Mother was at work, at least that was what she said, but ever since Jamie’s Father had passed away, she seemed different. Tears were rushing down his eyes, like there were two rivers on his cheeks. All of a sudden, a ghostly figure appeared. They both stared at each other, Jamie recognised him but he didn’t know where from. So, he walked up to the man and before he knew it, the ghost disappeared. His mind transported him back to the alleyway. Then Jamie remembered, he remembered that the ghostly figure that had been with him for a long time was his Father
Great poem Hamza, I love the dramatic feel to it.
Maybe try to add an alliteration and don’t forget to add the punctuation at the end and be careful not to repeat or make typos.
I’d love to hear more of the story.
Hello Frances!
I agree!
You just said poem but this is a story.
Lily
Hi Hamza!
I like when you put Jamie’s mouth dropped in awe.