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My Nightmare Niamh+Archie

“What was that?” shouted Keira as the thunder shot across the midnight sky like a bullet. She couldn’t get her head out of the covers. What was it? A dream, a nightmare, or was it real? Thunder and lightning smashing the window. I heard a creak coming up stairs, a glass shattering  and people shouting. My heart rate climbed higher and higher. I was sweating and I couldn’t hear my self think even though the only thing to think about was what would happen next.

One Response to “My Nightmare Niamh+Archie”

  1. 1)I loved how you describe how the character felt.
    2)How did you come up with the idea of it?
    3)Maybe try to add some more speech.

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