The haunted house By Lottie
Ellie and her friends decided to go to a haunted house to see if the home is a real place. At the haunted house there lives an old lady in the middle of nowhere. To Ellie’s surprise the home was real so she opened the creepy door…. .There was an old lady sitting on an old rocking chair smiling at Ellie.
I like how you have used the haunted house. Could you use more description? Maybe you should make it more spooky!