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The stars

Outside , the stars glowed as well the cars glowed , people had flashing outfit but two cars didn’t one looked broken and the car next to it looked ghostly and was moving and chased after a very bright car and crashed into it and went a way from that car and act normal.The car was behind me in the car I was in and came closer and closer and crashed into me every thing was black I was speech less I thought I was died but every thing turned normal after that.I think the car knocked me out!

2 Responses to “The stars”

  1. I like how the title has a double meaning!
    why did you choose night over day?
    could you change died to dead so the tense is consistant?

  2. I love how the cars glow, where did you get the inspiration from? You could improve on your tense.

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