Zoe at the stables
Zoe got to hang out with Pin this weekend. They went horse riding together on the abandoned field (nobody had been there for over 10 years). Zoe tacked her horse up named raven. Pin tacked up his horse named elvis. All of a sudden elvis and raven bucked off. Zoe and Pin both hurt there leg and arm. A few months later they where better.
Hi Zoe u have an amazing poem but I think u should describe the pin to emphasise the effect of the pin.