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Howling Danger by Sandra

Lifeless, shattered glass lay painfully in the sunlight. Wolves howled in the last shadows of the day. Emily could hear their pain. Darkness flooded the house. No light entered it any more, it lay in shadow all the time. She could only see dark figures. Figures that moved silently around her. Emily moved slowly. She looked backwards to see if something was there. It was. It was Them! She understood there might be a entrance but not always a exit. What would she do?

One Response to “Howling Danger by Sandra”

  1. 1. Can you describe the dark figures a bit more?
    2. I really like the story.
    3. Again please could you describe the dark figures a bit more and maybe put a few more full stops.
    Other than that I think that this is a good story.

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