The church
Kesha waltzed in , there was nothing I’m not exaggerating there was simply nothing well there was a giant box . But of course she wasn`t here for a church resurrection. A musty smell lingered. There was worn ripped tapestries. Angel stained windows lay at the side of the Church. It dawned on her that this Church was abandoned. She heard voices and ducked behind a box.
1) I really like the setting description.
2) Where did you get the ideas from?
3) This is really good, but it could be a bit longer.