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The lonely girl

At the age of eight Miley was a courageous young girl but had no friends to play with. This is because all of the other students think she is a freak and leave her out all the time, if only she had one friend. Walking down a new road that Miley had never seen before there was a house tall, crooked house. Miley steeped inside, in the corner a desk stood with papers and on the right of that a couch dust and squeaky. The wall paper was full of dead body’s. the floor covered n blood. Miley was terrified. Looking though the papers pictures of a woman and a man was on them and the names Bethany and Mike they were Miley’s parents. 

One Response to “The lonely girl”

  1. Hi, I like your work I like how you described the house as a crooked house.
    For your next writing why don’t you put your name with your title? Is there something you could add to this?
    Why don’t you add a comma on the first sentence.

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