The Devil dragon by neilas and Alfie
Some people don’t believe in dragons. But if you’ve seen the Devil dragon I certainly would!
If you saw a Devil Dragon would you be able to recognise it? In fact, the Devil Dragon is a very small dragon. It’s tail is deadly and spiky because If you get hit by the tail you will either get hit across the world or you will die from the thorns in the devil’s tail.
The Devil Dragon’s skin is blood red . It has horns like the devils. During the summer the devil dragon lives underground in lava pits. In the winter it lives in the deserts of Africa.
Are Devil dragons dangerous? Most people believe they are because they can turn you into a lava if they look looks at you.
This is brilliant it is very descriptive
why would you believe
make it a bit longer
I like how you put a rhetorical question. Maybe think about adding more complex words for a better description? Good dragon story!