The night dragon
The night dragon is a silent murderer that has made a lot of people disappear if you want to track one DONT because the dragon will see you and bite you to make you disappear.
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very good.
I really enjoyed it !
1. I think you could make it a bit bigger,
2. Maybe check your punctuation ,
3. Maybe could you add some more detail.