The spooky dragons by Ethan
There was once a dragon, he was a prince of all the dragons. He said “Dear dragons, I would like to send you to kill all the humans so they are all dead.”
The knight dragons were sent out with the queen riding on one of their backs from the highest mountain you’ve ever seen, it almost reaches above the clouds! They live up here so no one can see them. The king said “Go and attack now so that all humans are dead.”
The humans were screaming and running away, but they weren’t fast enough to escape the speedy knight dragons. The fire dragons followed behind, burning the villages down.
Suddenly, the marshmallow dragon, having been roasted by the fire dragons, awoke. He ended up helping the other dragons by squishing all the humans into his pillowy scales. When he transforms into a marshmallow, everything around him shrinks, which makes it easy for him to swallow them up. He grows and eats everything in his path.
1.I think it is a really imaginative and it is good to read.
2.Do you think you could add some description?
3.Could you try and make it more like a story.