The winter dragon
The winter dragon
One day in the white; slushy snow lived a small dragon,who had grown up in the winter forest,his name was snowy, he was pale white,he could hide in the snow with out you even seeing him.Most of his family lived in the summer forest ( many of his family still lived in the winter side as well so he had more friends there) he liked living in the summer forest more then summer forest, he visited there some time. But remember if you want to meet one of these creatures all ways take big ice pops and cold water for them.
by maddie
I really like we’re there is slushy snow.
I think you could describe the opening more.
But over all you did a brilliant job! 🙂
I like how you have used slushy to describe the snow.