The snow dragon lives in the cold Antarctica. People do not dare to go near him of that they love eating humans alive. They have amazing teeth made of diamonds and their tails consist of frosted, silver scales. People dare to go near this beast. Would you go near it?
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Hi Lottie!
1. I love how you added a question at the end!
2.Do you like doing dragon pieces of writing?
3. Could you of added some more writing telling us about the why they eat humans alive?
Great
Does he have any friends?I love this story it is so interesting I also thing u could be a bit more exciting however it is still really good -Brooke
Hi Lottie I like the phrase “The snow dragon lives in the cold Antarctica.” I think that is quit a nice sentenc.
1) I really like the description that the dragons teeth were diamonds.
2) Why do people dare to go to that beast?
3) Can you tell me more how the dragon looks like.