Breaking news dragon whisperers-Frankie
Do you have the ability to tame dragons?Can you tranquil the most dangerous dragons?Do the most powerful dragons not scare you?Can your tenderly-spoken words help to still the mightiest of dragons?If you feel like you have the ability to do this job then here is what you will be expected to do:
.Come to are hidden valley;
. Dont tell anyone about this;
.TAME THE BEAST;
.Or drive them away from are valley;
In return you will reward you with:
.A bag of Graff diamonds;
.A private castle with servant;
.A 100,000,000;
.An army of dwarfs
If you are interested in this job please contact us on http://www.dragons.com
I love this piece of righting, its so full of great description and I love how you did a fake website. Next time could you try to not start with A. Great writing keep it up!
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Olivia SWW
i love this
Hi Frankie,
1. Love the ideas and it was funny to read.
2. what made you think of the sentences?
3. You could improve on the ed ing ly starters
other than that well done keep posting!