Now we interrupt your latest news session with some shocking breaking news the species the molten dragon has been spotted after being deemed as an extinct animal. The creature has said to have been soaring through mid-day breeze in a small town .
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This piece of work is excellent. I really like how you’ve written it like it’s a news report. A next step could be to describe the dragon and to make the piece of work longer.