Blog

Dragons

Dragon Poem

 

 

 

Eyes: demon eyes staring right into you

Spine: as spiky as 10 needles

Chest: as red as fire burning through a forest

Wings: as black as charcoal and ink

Tail: like a star on a wonky Christmas tree

Skin: as red as a volcano erupting

Claws: as sharp as icicles hanging from a water pipe

6 Responses to “Dragons”

  1. Reply
    Anonymous January 26, 2021 at 8:31 am

    well done Lottie, you have created some powerful images. Perhaps next time you could avoid leaving so much space between the title and the start of the poem.

  2. Reply
    Verity January 26, 2021 at 11:50 am

    I like the simile describing the claws like a icicles on a water pipe.

  3. Reply
    Mabel January 26, 2021 at 12:24 pm

    Wow Lottie! Brilliant poem, amazing adjectives.

  4. Reply
    medine 'anik January 26, 2021 at 6:34 pm

    beatilful poem lottie and they nice ajectives well done

  5. Reply
    Katie Hinks January 27, 2021 at 11:16 am

    Dear Lottie,

    A super poem. I especially like the final line.

    Well done!

    Mrs. H

  6. Reply
    Mrs Hendra January 27, 2021 at 4:23 pm

    What a great poem, Lottie. I like your use of simile, especially your last line. Well done!

Leave a Reply to Mabel Click here to cancel reply.