The Dragon’s lair
As the dragon enters its lair, its lime green eyes shoot a look where I hide. I hadn’t wanted to fall into this emerald green dragon lair.Suddenly it collapses into a pile treasure. That was my chance to escape. As I rushed to the exit, a huge bright green tail blocks my path. All of a sudden i trapped.
The dragon had surrounded me.Everywhere i look i saw different shades of green. Bright green, emerald green and dark green.Then I only saw dark red.
This is a great piece of action/adventure writing. You switch from narrating the action as it is happening (present tense) to retelling a story that has already happened (past tense). Which one would be better suited for this type of story do you think?