What is…
What is dark?
A wet rubber boot, and the icy Winter solstice.
What is bright? The morning sunlight coming through an open window, and the flash of a Viking's dragon amulet.
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I absolutely love the line ‘the flash of a Viking’s dragon amulet’, especially as you remembered the apostrophe!
Why did you think a wet, rubber boot is dark?
You could improve your first verse by expanding your ideas like you did in the second verse.