The razor-sharp claws dug into the firm concrete ground leaving prints of his hands,
His ebony, mirror eyes hunting for innocent creatures ready to pounce any second,
Stocky, drooping, jaggy skin keeping in the warmth of the dragon,
The elongated tail quivered around protecting from other predators..
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I really like how they described the skin.
What creative language have they used?
I think they should improve the description of the other features that the dragon has (wings, teeth)