where do you get your ideas?
gather them
from carrot filled carnivals
take them
for the best time
listen to them
helpfulness is coming your way
keep them
for a great holiday
sleep with them
for a good dream
walk with them
for a luck storm
sit with them
for a dream to come true
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I love the idea of ‘carrot filled carnivals’ as it paints such a vivid picture in my head!
Is there any line which you would like to improve now you have had time to think about it?
To make it even better is to look for synonyms for some of your words so that you do not include the obvious word choice.