Six things in a skyships explorer’s rucksack

A deafening alarm that goes off every time a threat is near.

A lunch box that refills when you want it to.

A glove that can break anything in one crush.

A lamp that creates a dragon that protects me from horrible beasts.

A potion that makes you fly high up in the sky.

A carpet that takes you anywhere you want in the whole wide world.

3 Responses to “Six things in a skyships explorer’s rucksack”

  1. yours is really discriptive i love it well done

  2. It is amazing I really like how you put a deafening alarm clock not just the alarm clock. to improve it you could put commas at the end of each sentence.

  3. Maybe describe the lunch box next time. Well done.

Please leave a comment. Remember, say something positive; ask a question; suggest an improvement.

%d bloggers like this: