My adventure so far
It was weeks after we had left London and we should have been only a week away from our destination, but high winds and bright white blizzards had blown us of track.
We were sailing above the never forgiving mountains when the ship came to a sudden halt, Tauriel stared at her sister Galadriel and shouted “Gala get down to the room, DRAGONS are coming.”
“Hold on tight” screamed the Captain to Galadriel, who was still running to the room “I am sending the Stargrazer back down to earth, it’s too dangerous in the skies.”
This is a really good story opening, Minnie. I like the phrase “high winds and bright white blizzards”, it’s quite poetic. You’ve also got some good dialogue going. i’m looking forward to reading how this story develops.