sky-ship adventure.
You’ve probably been on a air-ship when the nice breeze through the air was surprisingly wonderful. Remember how it feels to have a great day in the air. Bumble Bees buzzing and birds chirping.
I bet you enjoyed the travel to the Golden sand Island to have a nice swim, Crosby Beach to collect shells and a shovel of course to dig up skulls for the museum and a surf board for Golden sand Island.
But you should also try a ship when it wouldn’t be fun cause if it was snowing hard it would take us down. When the ships starts shaking it shakes like a swing all alone in the park.
And some say they seen Demi-Dragons looking for there next meals. But you probably wont believe me some say the Demi-Dragons eat there bloody food with there thousands of yellow teeth.
wow that was really good well done
AMAZING! I really loved reading this story, YOUR MADE OF IDEAS! The reason I loved this story is because, well, the Demi-dragon was a really good Idea, and the rest of this story is full of bees buzzing, and birds chirping. There is only 1 thing that I would change, and that is when on paragraph 3 you say, When the ship starts shaking and it shakes like a swing all alone in the park, I think you could replace that with maybe, When the ship starts shaking and it rocks like a swing in the park. Maybe? I don’t know, but I think that little bit could be a bit better!