The mean dragon
The mean dragon saw a nice boy who was scared of the dragon the boy was called Joe and Bella try to run away. from the dragon Joe said to Bella to go back to the house ‘’ I can do this I am not scared of anything then Bella went home and left Joe and the dragon.
I think this story could be improved, not to much, but you just don’t have the right punctuation, although I think that this story will be a good one if you do improve it!