They advance

Suddenly the airship shot up in to a misty grey sky  the upward jolt nearly knocked Sam off the sky ship into the dark seas below. The sky ship started to shake. Ferocious dragons of about twenty or more came at the sky ship shooting sharp rocks, like shards of glass. ‘Load the cannons’ cried captain Joe, ‘We have to stop them’.

3 Responses to “They advance”

  1. I really like this and it made me want to read more. Maybe you could make it a bit longer so then more things could happen.

  2. instead of into a misty grey sky you could do into the misty grey sky anyways beside that it is very good

  3. Amazing! I love the rocks being described as shards of glass.

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