Disaster strikes by Noah
Episode 1
The glimmering, orange sun rose above the vivid blue sky. Gabi sprung out of here bed like a sling shot and banged here head on the eaves.she woke up Gabriel (who had slobber on his mouth)he was half asleep. Gabi got out of here curled wooden bed. She got into here hard souled slippers and looked through the window and saw a ginormous Gabi’s eyes gazed if it was the sun staring down with beams. Gabriel woke up as if he had a heart attack.He looked through the window and saw a big albino eye staring at them like an eagle. Gabi and Gabriel ran down the stairs as if it was Christmas Day The dragon broke there balloon with its daggery wings. The airship fell down like a bomb.
Episode 2
They both woke up in a apple tree all scruffy and wet and they needed to think the Airship. One of the dragons flew down like a bullet from a shot gun. As they tried to get out of the bountiful tree Gabi looked under here petite feet and saw the amazingly soft carpet of lush green grass. She took a moment to appreciate the scene. The magic deers pranced along the stones on the path of the pong as well the small opening were rabbits home are. Bee’s buzzed around brightly coloured plants and tiny birds fluttered and flapped in the sky above humming a tune.Gabriel looked for materials. As the day went dim. The magnificent pond shimmered and glowed like tiny stars in the sky. Stoney pillars appear to erupt from the ground and are strewn randomly around the landscape. Suddenly Gabriel saw something in the distance “ LOOK OUT.”
I like how you describe everything you talk about.
Why did you choose the title .
To make it even better you could Mack a list of things around the people and to make even better use a semicolon.