The Storm of the Starship
In the distance Rosie noticed something very strange, she yelled over to Thomas “I think danger is looming!” Thomas ran over to Rosie at the bow of the Starship. On the horizon the friends could see a storm brewing the clouds were turning from white, to grey and to black getting bigger every minute. The flashing from the sky and the clatter of the thunder sounded like crashing waves.
The friends ran to the helm of the Starship and tried to turn them around to an Island they remembered seeing moments before, the mighty storm would not get them on the Island down below. Just as they thought they were safe, all of a sudden they heard an “arrrr” from behind them, it was pirates that live in the sky, the pirates came tumbling down and they were holding onto cloud ropes and invaded the Starship, popping the balloon that helps it fly with their sharp gold knives and they went spiralling down, crashing into the HUGE strong waves in the sea.
Oh no! Sky pirates! I love it! Some great adverbials too.