Landed
You look around and see a strange place with tall rough, rocky walls that keep you in as a prisoner, then you see something very strange, above you there is a small patch of light it was becoming larger and larger. You feel strangely warm; you smell something burning.
I really love your story and it is incredible I think you should be an author and write lots of story’s!!!!!!!!
Analena Hemelge
I really like the sentence that says, You look around and see a strange place with tall rocks.
I enjoy that the end of the sentence is left on a cliff hanger.
I will enjoy seeing more.