Shadow fax the sky-ship
They landed with a thump. Harry was scared. He never thought they would crash. Ed could see terror in his eyes as they got out of the wrecked ship. Once Ed saw a tree moving he suddenly knew where they were. Fangorn. Where the entra live.
The trees towered over the sky-ship like a stone giant. The leaves cast dark, gloomy shadows over the ground. Ed peered round a tree only to find that he was clinging to the leg of an entra. Ed recognized this entra from a legend that his father told him, it was Burntwood. He was huge. The biggest of the entra . His legs were tall with big clumps of moss growing on them and his arms were as long as a truck.
Harry and Ed froze where they stood. The Inky black sky surrounded them, the glow of its two moons lit up the trees and entra. One entra took a step forward and Harry and Ed started to run.
I really liked your part 2 my favourite part was: The Inky black sky surrounded them, the glow of its two moons lit up the trees and entra.